文法, 句子結構問題 !

2012-05-06 3:59 am
有 d assignment 問題唔係好識 ...

我想問下呢句有乜 erros / weaknesses ?
如果重寫呢句應該點寫先岩 ?

Peter is full of energy and he does not know how to enjoy tranquilty ; it is difficult to imagine to him still . Whether at home or while he was working , he was always busy ?

1. Still should be del ?? right ?

回答 (3)

2012-05-07 10:35 am
✔ 最佳答案
Peter is full of energy and he does not know how to enjoy tranquillity ; it is difficult to imagine him to be still / stay still. No matter where he is (at home or at work) , he was always busy


2012-05-07 02:36:41 補充:
he is always busy
2012-05-06 4:54 pm
error and correction:-
Peter is full of energy and does not know how to be in a "tranquil mood" It is hard for us to imagine that he will be kept still and collected; for he always keeps himself excited,troubled, at home or at work!
2012-05-06 8:03 am
Peter is full of energy and doesn't know how to calm himself. It is hard for us to imagine that he'll calm down for he always keeps himself busy .


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