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Mr Martin , Our General Manager , is satisfaction with your proposal . He is glad to see that is a very innovative .
句子咁寫有少少錯 ,Our唔洗大楷O,satisfaction轉形容詞satisfied, that 後面is要加it係前面,very前面唔洗a。

咁寫就得喇:
Mr Martin, our General Manager, is satisfied with your proposal. He is glad to see that it is very innovative.

2012-05-05 16:59:14 補充：
跟意见001,可以有另一寫法:
Our General Manager Mr Martin is satisfied with your proposal. He is glad to see that it is very innovative.

Mr Martin who is our General Manager, is satisfied with your proposal. And he is glad to see that is very innovative .