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Dear Mr.Li :

I would like to inform you that will take back 3 sets computer
and telephone sets from your company.
Please adivse me that your collecting time.

Thanks for your co-operation !

20/April/2012

XXXX trading ltd.

What a lousy translation given by answerer 003! It must be a colluding act for his voters.
"I would like to inform you that will take back 3 sets computer and telephone sets from your company. Please adivse me that your collecting time."
It is full of grammatic errors!!!

Dear Mr. Lee, I would like to get/collect the 2 computers and 3 telephones which were given to your company back. Please inform me the time that are avaliable for me to pick them up. Thanks.

Hi/ Dear Mr Lee,

I would like to take back the 2 computers and 3 phones that were given to your company early on. please let me know when you will be available.

Dear Mr.Li,
We would like to inform you that we will take back 2 computers and 3 phones sent to your office earlier on.
Please advise on the collection time and how.
Thanks for your co-operation.
(Date)
xxx trading Co. Ltd.

Dear Mr. Lee,

Greetings.

I have intended to take back my two computers and three telephones sent to your office previously. I can approach you at your convenience, please confirm.

Thank you very much!

你好,李先生, 我想拿回之前給你們公司的兩部電腦和三部電話, 麻煩請告知你什麼時候有空
Hello, Mr. Lee(Sir), I would like to take back two computers and three phones to your company, please let me know when you are free