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2012-03-25 12:34 am

如果話現時學生的心理生活不健康,用哪個例子較好

Not only can we find electronic gadgets like gomeboys in children's hands,but also
sophisticated electronic products including iPhones

It is not uncommon for us to find some children who have more than one mobile phone and computer

更新1:

可以的話請提供一條比這兩條好的

更新2:

問題是哪個例子寫法較好

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YIP

2012-03-25 1:03 pm

✔ 最佳答案

Nowadays, we find some children to possess electronic gadgets not only gameboys but also sophisticated products like iPhones.
Nowadays, it is not uncommon for us to find some children who have more than one mobile phone and computer as well.
In my opinion,the first sentence's meaning is more appropriate than the next one.

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彥衡

2012-03-25 1:31 am

2個都差唔多，因為都係話學生同電子產品
you can say 其他例如青少年既價值觀同以前唔同社會風氣唔同左
再補例證話咩隱閉青年.......之類嘅嘢

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