英文高手請進! 請問有冇錯Grammar ?

2012-03-21 3:32 am
請問有冇錯Grammar?

Jack and Rose floats on the sea, because the Titanic already is wreck, but they only have one wood, they cannot go to ashore together, so Jack give the wood with Rose, give the exist hope with Rose only.

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2012-03-21 5:49 am
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不僅grammar有錯,而且句法亦不好 (connectives) !

Jack and Rose were floating on the sea because the Titanic had already been wrecked. As they had only one piece of wood, they could not go ashore together. Thus Jack gave the wood to Rose, giving her the only hope they had.
2012-03-21 3:48 am
Jack and Rose float on the sea because the Titanic is already wreck but they only have one wood.They cannot go to ashore together so Jack give the wood to Rose togive exist hope to Rose only.
(I can only know these mistakes.)
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