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The Honest WoodcutterHarry and Jack are woodcutters. Once when Harry was working, he dropped his axe into a pond. He cried loudly since it was his only axe.Suddenly, the goddess of the pond appeared and held a golden axe in front of him. She asked if it was his. Harry told her that it wasn’t. Then she asked him to describe his axe. He told her that it was just a plain iron axe.The goddess knew that Harry was honest. Therefore, she gave him both the golden axe and his iron axe. He became rich and told his neighbor, Jack , about it.Jack went to the pond and threw his iron axe into it immediately. The goddess asked him what had happened. Jack lied that he lost his golden axe, and the goddess was furious. She gave neither the golden axe nor his own axe to him because of his greediness.We should be honest and should not be greedy.
文法錯誤Grammatical Mistake(s)
2012-03-20 2:50 am
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2012-03-20 6:50 am
✔ 最佳答案
-----The goddest was furiously angry about it. Furiously used as an adverb.It is a traditional short story that teaches a moral lesson,esp. one with Aesop's. The Honest Woodcutter has very few Grammar mistake here.--a message of congratulation.
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2012-03-20 4:07 pm
Harry and Jack were woodcutters.
Comment:
You may use past tense in your story.
Comment:
You may use past tense in your story.
2012-03-20 3:14 pm
There is no need to change any words in your story. Did you write or copy it?
2012-03-20 17:16:20 補充：
Harry and Jack are woodcutters. (The following is about something that happened in the past.) Once when Harry was working,..... of his greediness.
(The lesson of this story is:) We should be honest and should not be greedy.
2012-03-20 17:18:04 補充：
- The first sentence is about Harry and Jack's present occupation.
The middle part is the story about an incident in the past.
The last sentence is a lesson for readers to learn.
2012-03-20 17:16:20 補充：
Harry and Jack are woodcutters. (The following is about something that happened in the past.) Once when Harry was working,..... of his greediness.
(The lesson of this story is:) We should be honest and should not be greedy.
2012-03-20 17:18:04 補充：
- The first sentence is about Harry and Jack's present occupation.
The middle part is the story about an incident in the past.
The last sentence is a lesson for readers to learn.
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