如題，請幫忙檢查以下的英文求職信的文法和格式有沒有問題。謝謝!
DearSir, Application for thepost of Accounts Clerk
With reference to your advertisementin the website of JobsDB on 1st January 2012, I am writing to applyfor the position of accounts clerk. I have completed mysecondary school education at ABC Secondary Schoolin May 2005 with seven passes in the Hong Kong Certificateof Education Examination. I have acquired a second level certificate in Book-keeping and Accounts issued by the LondonChamber of Commerce in 2007. Furthermore, I have also completed a diploma inaccounting studies and obtained a certificate of Accredited AccountingTechnician Examination issued by HKIAAT in 2010 December
I joined ABC Limited as Accounts Clerk since 2008 May. My job dutiesmainly include receivable collection, petty cash flow and issuing cheque etc.I have good communication skills in Cantonese and English, goodtelephone manner and interpersonal skills. I also havethe knowledge of XXX System. I have confidence that I have sufficient abilityand experience to fulfill the qualification for your position.I enclose a resume with details of my personal particulars. I should bevery grateful if you can grant me an interview so that I can explain myqualifications more fully.Yours sincerely,Signature
Enclose1. Resume2. Copy of HKCEE Certificate3. Copy of LCCI level 2 Certificate
請幫忙check英文求職信的文法是否正確
2012-03-17 6:13 am
回答 (3)
2012-03-18 10:01 am
✔ 最佳答案
意見者002說得對,你在 covering letter內重複說你的學業和工作史, 因為resume內有, 應只提重點. 大妒是提及去Interview explain your qualifications, 好像當讀你信的人不識qualifications, 要你 explain fully. 其實covering letter 不用說太多, 主要重點. 從你resume 可知道你的學歷. Manager 沒有時間看長的 covering letter, 如果他或她對你的申請有興趣, interview上大可問你. 我沒有在你的求職信每句 check grammar, 倒不如寫過例子, 只是一suggestion, 僅作參考.certificates 不用寄去, 除非廣告上列明要. 北美多用Accounting clerk 如果廣告上是Accounts Clerk, 你要跟它們. Good Luck!Date
Dear Sir or Madam:
Re : Accounting Clerk Position
With reference to your advertisement in the website of JobsDB of January 1, I wish to apply for the position of Accounting Clerk in your company.
I am currently employed as an Accounting Clerk with ABC Limited, have more than four years experience in receivable collection, petty cash flow and issuing cheques. I speak (fluent) Cantonese and English, and have a working knowledge of XXX system. I feel my skills and experience would be great assets for your company in this position.
I enclose my resume for your reference, and am available for an interview at your convenience. Please feel free to contact me if you require any further information.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Sincerely,
Your Signature
Your full name
Enclosure:
My resume
2012-03-18 20:53:29 補充：
Correction: run on sentence
....with ABC Limited. I have more than four years experience ....
參考: Collins Cobuild Dictionary
2012-03-17 6:18 am
個DearSir要格開---->Dear Sir
2012-03-16 22:22:06 補充：
寫 informal letter 勿寫簡寫!
2012-03-16 22:22:06 補充：
寫 informal letter 勿寫簡寫!
2012-03-17 6:16 am
As a little reminder, in formal letter, please remember don't use 'etc'
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