(20分) 特別的求職信 中文翻譯英文, 千其唔好用翻譯機!

2012-03-14 2:46 pm
你好,很久沒有與你通訊及向你問候,相信你看到我的電郵都會感覺得有點"岳然",

回想起,去年5月初幸得你極力推薦給A部門,我才能夠順利由內部調職到A部門,而過往一年內,在A部門學習了很多生產技術及布料定型技術等。

而在工餘時間也積極進修知識 ,裝備自己,而上年於九月已入讀xx大學的工商管理(文學士),並預期在2015年畢業。以及在本年3月在xx學院已修畢"物料學"文憑。

此外,在我的英文語文方面,仍然需要有待改進,所以在5月份繼續會積極進修,離補對自己英語的書寫運用及說話表達的能力。

最後, 我悉知貴部門有職位空缺,所以附上cv,希望你能夠再給予我多一次機會。

多謝您過住7年多的照顧及裁培!

回答 (2)

2012-03-14 9:53 pm
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Dear xxx, haven't communicated with you for a period of time, hope you won't be stunned by this email. How are you now?

Recalling my best memory, I cannot be smoothly transferred to the A Department in May 2011 without your strengthen support & recommendation. During my work in the A Department, I have acquired various practical experience in production skills, fabric forming technology, etc. in past year.

To well equip myself for the career growth, I had started the Bachelor course of business administration in xxx University & hopefully will obtain the BBA by 2015. Besides, I had completed the Diploma study of Material Technolgy in xxx Institute on Mar 2012.

Moreover, I will continue my study in written & spoken English to further enhance my skill in communication in May 2012 as there is still room for improvement.

Recently, in hear of there will be vacancy in your department, I hope you can grant me another golden chance again to work with you. Attached is my CV for your perusal.

Once again, thanks for your cordially caring & support in developing my career in past 7 years.
2012-03-14 6:23 pm
You are good, very long not and sent regards with your communication to you, believed you saw my email can feel " a little; Mountain however " , Recalled that was fortunate enough to your recommend strongly at the beginning of last May for a department, I could 夠 be transferred to another post smoothly from the interior to a department, but in passing one year, has studied many production technologies and the cotton material stereotypia technology in a department and so on. But also positively takes advanced courses in the leisure time the knowledge, equips itself, but entered last year in September reads xx university's business management (B.A. degree), and anticipated that graduates in 2015. As well as has repaired in this year March in xx institute finishes " Material study " Diploma. In addition, in mine English language aspect, still needed to await improvements, will therefore continue in May to take advanced courses positively, to will make up utilizes to own English writing and speaks expression ability. Finally, I know the expensive department to have the job vacancy entirely, therefore enclosed cv, hoped that you can 夠 give me again many opportunities. Many thanks you have lived in more than 7 year of attendance and cut cultivate!


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