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2012-03-12 7:51 am
It isindisputable that compensated dating is getting more and more serious recentyears, and it seems to have reached a terrifying stage that evokes the public.So what are the causes of such an obscene behavior? Firstly, it is due to the lack of sexeducation. Under the influence of Chinese reserved tradition, it is impossiblefor people to talk about sex explicitly. What ends up is that teens will learnsexual knowledge through viewing pornographic films. Apparently, this is notthe appropriate way to gain sexual knowledge. In fact, what these pornographicfilms depict is not the real picture. Together with the lack of parentalguidance, compensated dating gradually became a critical problem. Secondly, the over-emphasis on materialismis also a root cause of such a problem. Nowadays, there are many advertisementspropagandizing famous brands that will easily lure teenagers to buy them. Thereckless pursuits of material comfort will never cease and they may end up inno choice but to participate in compensated dating in order to earn money forbuying the things they desired. Had the problem been considered earlier,compensated dating would not have been so serious. However, we stillneed to tackle this problem. The government can do so by means ofeducation. To stop these mistaken beliefs affecting the pillars of the futuresociety, educating them proper values are the only way. Through education,teens may know that money is not the single biggest thing in the world. As aresult, they will not be bogged down in debts. Not only can the government help curbing thecraze, but parents can also help doing so. They can teach their children propermorals, letting them know compensated dating is something that will nevercorrupt public morals. Once they know the seriousness of this obscene behavior,they will never attempt to do so. All in all, the problem will be solved soonif the government now starts taking actions in talking the compensated dating.

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2012-03-12 7:36 pm
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It is indisputable that compensated dating is getting more and more seriousin recent years, and it seems to have reached a terrifying stage that evokes the public. So what are the causes of such an obscene behavior? Firstly, it is due to the lack of sex education. Under the influence of Chinese reserved tradition, it is impossible for people to talk about sex explicitly. What ends up is that teens will learn sexual knowledge through viewing pornographic films. Apparently, this is not the appropriate way to gain sexual knowledge. In fact, what these pornographic films depict is not the real picture. Together with the lack of parental guidance, compensated dating has gradually become a critical problem. Secondly, the over-emphasis on materialism is also a root cause of such a problem. Nowadays, there are many advertisements propagandizing famous brands that will easily lure teenagers to buy them. The reckless pursuits of material comfort will never cease and they may end up with no choice but to participate in compensated dating in order to earn money for buying the things they desire. Had the problem been considered earlier,compensated dating would not have been so serious. However, we still need to tackle this problem. The government can do so by means of education. To stop these mistaken beliefs from affecting the pillars of the future society, educating them with proper values is the only way. Through education, teens may know that money is not the single biggest thing in the world. As a result, they will not be bogged down in debts. Not only can the government help to curb the craze, but parents can also help to do so. They can teach their children proper morals, letting them know compensated dating is something that will never corrupt public morals. Once they know the seriousness of this obscene behavior, they will never attempt to do so....
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2012-03-12 9:02 am
Adverbial clauses are subordinate clauses which perform the same function of adverbs.Various concepts can be expressed with different adverb clauses.Composition checking can only be done on such assumptions:-
para(1) evokes the (proper attention) of public.
para(2)Chinese (conservative and old fashioned) tradition,
Gradually (becomes),
para(6)the latest craze,
will (go on corrupting) public morals.
to do (it)
para(7)to tackle the problem on (compensated dating).


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