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2012-02-29 8:08 am
Dear mum,
Today i did kayaking and raft building. It was really fun but it was tiring too. For kayaking, we need to follow the teacher through the river and do some fun things, such as walking on kayaks.

The dinner here was great. I love their delicious dessert so much. We also did face painting before we went to bed, it was really fun too

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2012-02-29 8:58 am
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Dear mum,
Today I went kayaking and raft building. It was really fun, but it was tiring also. For kayaking, we had to follow the teacher through the river and do some fun things, such as walking on kayaks.

The dinner here was great. I love their delicious dessert so much. We also did face painting before we went to bed- it was really fun too


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