My bedroom is my favorite place and it’s a place where I can relax. My room isn’t really big but it’s not small either, now I’ll talk about what my room looks like. My room shaped like a rectangle with the door on the top right corner and a big closet on the left hand corner. In front of the closet is a bookshelf and next to the bookshelf is a small cabinet. On the other end is my single bed. On the right hand side, there’re a desk, a keyboard and a cupboard. My desk is always messy with a lot of books and little things. In my small cupboard, there’re headphones, hair ties, wallets and many more. On the wall, there’s a window with white curtain and on the right hand side of my closet, there’s a full length mirror. This is what my room looks like.
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please check my grammar!?
2012-02-23 8:59 am
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2012-02-23 9:03 am
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your paragraph is pretty much good and i think there's no grammatical error on it. =)
2012-02-23 8:32 pm
a few mistakes are there like:
my room is shaped like a rectangle with a door (since you're mentioning door the first time).
there is a desk....cupboard.
there are headphones...and many more.
there is a window with a white curtain
my room is shaped like a rectangle with a door (since you're mentioning door the first time).
there is a desk....cupboard.
there are headphones...and many more.
there is a window with a white curtain
2012-02-23 5:09 pm
Some minor corrections are there. Here you go:
My bedroom is my favorite place to relax. My room isn’t really big but it’s not small either. Now I’ll talk about what my room looks like. My room is shaped like a rectangle with the door in the top right corner and a big closet in the left hand corner. In front of the closet is a bookshelf and next to the bookshelf is a small cabinet. On the other end is my single bed. On the right hand side, there’s a desk, a keyboard and a cupboard. My desk is always messy with lot of books and little things. My small cupboard contains headphones, hair ties, wallets and much more. On the wall, there’s a window with a white curtain and on the right hand side of my closet, there’s a full length mirror. This is what my room looks like.
My bedroom is my favorite place to relax. My room isn’t really big but it’s not small either. Now I’ll talk about what my room looks like. My room is shaped like a rectangle with the door in the top right corner and a big closet in the left hand corner. In front of the closet is a bookshelf and next to the bookshelf is a small cabinet. On the other end is my single bed. On the right hand side, there’s a desk, a keyboard and a cupboard. My desk is always messy with lot of books and little things. My small cupboard contains headphones, hair ties, wallets and much more. On the wall, there’s a window with a white curtain and on the right hand side of my closet, there’s a full length mirror. This is what my room looks like.
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