書信！請幫忙翻譯做英文！急用！！

Dear Mr. X

Greeting. Sorry to bother you at your busy hour. I have a question for you about the coming Summer holiday.

I want to know when is the first day of school for the next school year. Would it be the third Monday in August just like last year ?

I like to take a personal leaf on May 31st ( last day of school ) and June 1st ( the graduation day ). I must return home this summer because my mother is sick and will undergo an operation soon. If I leave before June 1st, I can save about $2000 on the airline ticket.

For courtesy sake, I do intend to ask you in person but Monday is a holiday and those discount tickets run out very quickly, that is why I propose my question and request through this email.

To help me secure a ticket, please give me a reply as soon as you read this.

Thank you.



2012-02-18 08:55:17 補充：
Polite enough, no need for a closing paragraph.

2012-02-19 07:33:23 補充：
把原文再看一看，想一想。其實你是在週末寫這一封信的，所以百忙中打擾這些客套話，看起來有點假，不如改成下面的說法。
Sorry to bother you on weekend when you supposed to rest.

Dear Mr.XXX

Hello, I'm sorry to bother you busy!
I would like to ask about summer

Will the next school year (2012-2013) the first day of school is the number?
Will the previous year, in the August 3 Monday?

5 month 31 (last day) and June 1 (Graduation.) Can I please leave?


Surgery due to my mother, I must return home in the summer. If left before the June 1, tickets will be $ 2000 cheaper

Would like to return to school himself to ask, but because of the week a holiday, special fares have been depleted, may be sold out, so by e-mail inquiries

If you can, please reply as soon as possible



xx xxxxx復原編輯

Please help translate the following to do in English!
Very urgently!
請幫忙翻譯以下內容做英文！
非常急用！

Dear Mr.XXX
Dear Mr.XXX

Hello, I'm sorry to bother you busy!
I would like to ask about summer
你好，很抱歉在百忙之中打擾你！
我想問關於暑假的問題

Will the next school year (2012-2013) the first day of school is the number?
Will the previous year, in the August 3 Monday?
請問下學年(2012-2013)的開學日是幾號？
會否與上年度一樣，在8月的第3個星期一？

5 month 31 (last day) and June 1 (Graduation.) Can I please leave?
我可否於5月31( last day ) 及6月1(Graduation)請事假?Surgery due to my mother, I must return home in the summer. If left before the June 1, tickets will be $ 2000 cheaper
由於家母將進行手術，我必須於暑假回鄉。若能於6月1前離開，機票將能便宜
$2000Would like to return to school himself to ask, but because of the week a holiday, special fares have been depleted, may be sold out, so by e-mail inquiries
本想回校時親口問，但由於星期1放假，而特價機票已所剩無幾，可能會售完，所以透過電郵查詢If you can, please reply as soon as possible
可以的話，請儘快回覆(Hard line feel less left segment closing paragraph, but not know to add baa)
(硬係覺得少左段closing paragraph，不過唔知加咩好）Thank you,
多謝


黑色=英文
紅色=中文

Dear XXX:
Hello, I'm sorry to bother you busy!
I would like to ask about summer

Will the next school year (2012-2013) the first day of school is the number?
Will the previous year, in the August 3 Monday?

5 month 31 (last day) and June 1 (Graduation.) Can I please leave?


Surgery due to my mother, I must return home in the summer. If left before the June 1, tickets will be $ 2000 cheaper

Would like to return to school himself to ask, but because of the week a holiday, special fares have been depleted, may be sold out, so by e-mail inquiries

If you can, please reply as soon as possible