以下兩個情況英文可怎樣寫 (有自己嘗試寫)

In the AA report we received, we have some concern on the data under items BB and CC. Please double check they are accurate and let us know. Thanks.

We are gladly to build the XX report for you. Since there are many ways to build a report, to save us time for going back and forth, can you tell us exactly what you want in the report. If you have an old one, it would be helpful if you can send us a copy of that. We prefer you tell us by email. Thanks.

2012-02-07 15:28:43 補充：
concern of ( or about ), not on, sorry.

2012-02-08 13:23:06 補充：
Okay, see if this one meets your need.

We are glad to add a chapter of your work in our monthly CS report. Just to make sure we do not miss your accomplishment, can you tell us exactly which reviewed products or projects you want us to include in the chapter ? Please inform us by email. Thanks.

2012-02-09 03:51:11 補充：
不會一頭霧水，對方緊張過你。這是他的業績。你寫了A,B,C，他可能說，你忘了D,E。或者說，C不能寫，因為還沒有做好。
他不明白你說什麼的話，他一定倒過頭來問你。

1.應該是
Would you please help us to check the BB and CC in the AA report?
If there are typos in them, please send us the updated version.

2.

According to your request, we will write up the new XX report for you. Would you please kindly provide us which products or projects of your concern?
或者
Would you please kindly provide us with the details of the products or projects for consolidation.