我想問以下呢一首算吾算係詩?(請比埋意見)

2012-01-27 4:40 am
What a green Spring! She is the first of four seasons,
She bring us warm and wet, The breeze is passing by the earth And awaken all plant and animals in the world. Look! Migratory birds are singing in the sky like a sky singer; Look! The beautiful flowers are grow everywhere, sweet smell of Lavender in the air; Look! The emerald green grass; Look! Sky is blue and white; Sky is high and far;
Sky is bright;
Sky is wonderful. When she is coming, Every plants will grow up again!
The earth will be touched about Spring is coming.
What a red Summer! He is the second of four seasons,
He bring us many sunny day, But it is the most hot season.
Is time to eat the coolest ice-cream and go to swimming
we like play and play in Summer ! We enjoy our the most hot , playful, cheerful, When he is coming All trees will grow more leaves. Every children will play happily!
What a yellow Autumn! She is the third of four seasons,
She bring us dry and cool. Leaves begin to change gold and then start to fall The floor will become a beautiful rug. When she is coming Every laborious insects are begins to collect food for the winter.

What a white Winter!
She bring us snow and cold. The snowflake leaves the cloud fall off the sky slowly. Gloves and scarves are worn.
Everyone will make a cute snowman The bald trees are stand outside; Animals are sleeps in their snug house They are waiting for the spring arrival. When she is coming Every where willbecome white

回答 (1)

2012-01-27 8:55 am
✔ 最佳答案
1. 這太長, 變左一篇文

2. What a = What's a or What is a

3. Row 3 : She bring = She brings

4. Row 5 :....all plant = all plants

5. Row 7 : The flowers are grow = The flowers grow

6. Row 19 : He bring = He brings

7. Row 21 : Is time = It is time

8. Row 21: ..go to swimming = go to swim or go swimming

9. Row 29: She bring =She brings
10. Row 30 : Leaves begin to change gold and then start to fall =Leaves begin to change into gold and begin to fall

11. Row 33 : Every laborious insects are begins to collect food for the winter. = Every laborious insects begin to collect food for the winter.

12.Row 35 : She bring = She brings

13. Row 36 : The snowflake leaves the cloud = The snowflake leaves the clouds

14. Row 39 : Tha bald trees are stand = The bald trees are standing

15. Row 40 : Animals are sleeps = Animals are sleeping or Animals sleep

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