Is the following sentence grammatically correct?

2012-01-16 7:14 am
I could tell it broke their hearts as they broke the news- they would help me if they only could.

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2012-01-16 7:18 am
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Interesting sentence. I would put a semicolon, ie ; between "the news" and "they woud help me,", etc.
2012-01-16 6:02 pm
How about "I could tell that it broke their hearts to break the news, and that they would help me if they could."


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