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Everything waspeaceful. He (laid) on the grass with his wife. Birds, were sweeping across thesky; Waves, were pushing against the cliff; Breeze, were blowing gently, like alover whispering in one's ear. Everyone would like to stay forever. Butabruptly, everything was disappeared at the same time without prediction. Itbecame empty, hopelessness. It was impossible to explain, like a colourfulpainting became an empty canvas, like the blank emptiness he felt when his wifewas snatched from his slice. The sound of cars were disturbed his dream. Openinghis eyes, he stood up again. Then, he called 999 for telling the police that hehad killed somebody. But anyway, she was lucky that she was still survived. Now, he realised that his wife had alreadygone, probably she went to a quiet place, and do what she want. And now, he realisedthat it was already a fact, it couldn’t be changed as if he would be dead oneday. He would continue to alive and won't think of killing someone or revengefor anything because he knew that he felt unpleasant was because he used tohappy. And life was not a way to present how successful you had compared withother people. Life is a process for you to do the things you feel happy duringthe count of your dead.