I have been TW once time, when I had a head's surgery performed.
My father with me went there. I already remember that hotel experience.
There was inexpensive price in TW's hotel I thought.
Because my father always choose the low-priced thing at frist.
Frist at all, I want to talk about the environment of hotel's room.
It was a well size of room that made me feel well and it was very comfortable for me to relax on the bed.
And the serive staff, they were polite and treaded toward the guests excellently.
I asked something questions against the receptionist at the reception desk,
even their answers made me plesant.
And that, I was very impressed by the hotel's breakfast that It was buffet.
All kind of food in there were entremely delicious.
nevertheless there hadn't a lot of different facility. perhaps the basic's equipment already enoguh for the guests.
請問呢篇作文大概係香港學生既咩程度?
有d咩錯?
仲有d咩基本既Grammar要學?
請問呢篇英文大約咩程度
2012-01-04 3:51 am
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2012-01-05 12:19 am
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唔好意思要講如果單以英文程度來講連小學六年級(英語)的句子(造句)也不及格，但看構思的內容和一些詞語，應是中三左右吧。不過全文都是以中文思想寫英文句子，所以90%的句子都是錯的英文，因此不是英文文法的問題，另還有很多串錯的字(first, service, treated, pleasent, extremely, enough)。總而這之，除非是一個以中文讀這些英文字才會組織出你在講甚麼，一般英語人根本不會明白。以下把這文依你原意重寫，有些內容次序可能要搬動，但嘗試保留全部情節，所以整體而這仍是零碎的內容仍未算是真英語文章。[註：其實第一句已經太明白-「當你要做腦(頭)部手術時你入住TW酒店」真有點費解囧]I stayed at TW once at the time I had my head surgery performed.I remembered very well that experience of staying there with my father.My father booked the room at a low-priced package so I thought it was a good deal.First of all, the size of the room made me feel good and I relaxed on the bed comfortably.Second, the receptionist at the reception desk answered my inquires to satisfaction, and the other service staff was polite and treated guests excellently well.I was also impressed by the buffet breakfast with all kinds of delicious food.There weren’t a lot of different facilities in the hotel but the basics were all guests needed to have a pleasant stay.
2012-01-05 2:30 am
basic grammar needed:-
(1)guests(extremely,adv.) well.
(2) basic(considerations)were.
(1)guests(extremely,adv.) well.
(2) basic(considerations)were.
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