可否幫忙翻譯為英文...考試speaking用...

My name's xxx, I'm here today to apply the technician post. Why do I think that I can handle this job? First of all, in school, my studies were not very good, but when I have a real action, I do better than everyone. For example, in after-school practical training courses, I learn faster than my schoolmates, my skills are also better than them, they ask me for help if needed, therefore I think that I can manage a technician needed skills. Besides, I am very knee on sports, I play many different sports and do gym, so I'm very healthy and stronger than others, so I won't take sick-leave if I sick. Last, I am very positive thinking, always smile to people, schoolmates love me very much, so my relationship with others are good, I think that this can make me work well with my colleagues.

My name is xxx, technician today to apply for the post. Why is it I think I can qualify him for this position? First of all, in school, my grades are not particularly good, but when I actually take action, it will do better than anyone well, for example, in off-campus internships, I have other students to learn faster than the speed of technology than other students, and when other students have problems, will find me, so I think I can cope with the technology technician needed addition I am normally very keen sports person, do a lot of different types of sports and fitness, so I am in excellent health, and stronger than people, because, I do not work due to illness and not the end, my people were very Lotte, often smiling greet people, the students are like me, so I have good relationships, so I think I make in this regard to increase my colleagues and I work in harmony.

My name is XXX, I came to apply for the technician post. I think I can fit this job for several reasons, To start with, although my academic results were not stunning, my actual action is better than anyone else, for example, in the internship course held outside, my learning speed was faster than other classmates, with better skills. Other classmates asked me when they had problems, so I thick I can handle the skills criteria of technicians. Moreover, I am fond of sports very much, and do a lot of exercises of different kinds, and also go to the gym. Therefore, I am extremely healthy, with a body stronger than others that I will not need sick leaves. Lastly, I am very optimistic, always smile to others, my classmates love me very much, as a result, my relationship with others is so fine that improves my co-operation with my colleagues at work.

Speaking of neverster to Chi Chung:-Two things stating here to be observed in:-
(1)In punctuation,too much commas and no full-stop are not punctuation marks!
(2)The meaning of grammar should be used and followed correctly.
The interpretation have arrived in 5 conspicuous points to be noted if it should be running smoothly.

(1) I do better than(anyone else).In the sentence the word else=besides is an adverb at end.
(2)I'm very (keen):-In sentence an adjective keen used at end
(3)(if I sick not):- subordinate clause of reason
(4)(these):- the plural of "this"
(5) (make work well):-verb of perception.
It should be glad if you would learnt something!