I would like to apply for a flight attendant as it suits me so
much.I am not a person who are looking forward for a stable and relaxed job but rather work in a highly pressure but exciting environment.This
is one of the few jobs in here that can provides me a
chance of entering in a big family which assembles a variety
types of people and a wider view by traveling around the world.
As being a Graphic Designer in the past,there seems not much collection between a flight attendant and my past working experience,but actually they are in the same category and can be regard as a service industry.When I was in a Advertising Agency,I advanced my great capacity of tolerance and calm to handle each of nightmares before dead lines and all kind of strict clients,those are the great lessons for learning how to survive in a very competitive world through hard works.
Become a flight attendant ,that will be my another challenge and bright future for me.
請替我檢查這篇cover letter的英文語法.謝謝
2011-11-20 5:15 am
回答 (4)
2011-11-24 1:56 pm
I would like to apply for a flight attendant as it suits me so much.I am not a person who are looking forward for a stable and relaxing job and would rather work in a high pressure but exciting environment.This is one of the few jobs that can provide me a chance of entering a big family which assembles a variety types of people and a wider view by traveling around the world.
As being a Graphic Designer in the past, it seems not much connection between a flight attendant and my past working experience, but actually they are in the same category which can be regarded as a service industry. When I was in a Advertising Agency, I advanced my great capacity of tolerance and calm to handle each nightmare before deadlines and all kinds of strict clients, these are the great lessons that I have learned in order to survive in a very competitive world through hard-work.
Being a flight attendant will be another challenge which implies a bright future for me.
As being a Graphic Designer in the past, it seems not much connection between a flight attendant and my past working experience, but actually they are in the same category which can be regarded as a service industry. When I was in a Advertising Agency, I advanced my great capacity of tolerance and calm to handle each nightmare before deadlines and all kinds of strict clients, these are the great lessons that I have learned in order to survive in a very competitive world through hard-work.
Being a flight attendant will be another challenge which implies a bright future for me.
2011-11-24 7:39 am
Having learned that there will be a vacancy of flight attendant and I would like to apply for it. It is my earnest hope that I'm not a person who are looking for a stable and easy job, but are rather to work in a highly busy and exciting enviroment. In addition, this is a very good chance for me to be part of your company and widened my view on the world.
As being a Graphic Designer in the past, though there is not much relationships between my former job and the flight attendant as far as experience being concerned. But I thought that both jobs are belonged to the service industry. When I worked in an Advertising Agency, I used to work under high pressure such as overtime, overnight and dealing with all kinds of critical clients. All these have become my experience to be able to cope with the hard and competitive works.
Finally, I would like to introduce myself, female, 23 of age, Form 6 graduate, hard working, good health, obedient, honest, diligent and considerate. If granted, I will do with all my might to face that challenge and fullfill the duties required. I'm looking for your early reply, thank you.
As being a Graphic Designer in the past, though there is not much relationships between my former job and the flight attendant as far as experience being concerned. But I thought that both jobs are belonged to the service industry. When I worked in an Advertising Agency, I used to work under high pressure such as overtime, overnight and dealing with all kinds of critical clients. All these have become my experience to be able to cope with the hard and competitive works.
Finally, I would like to introduce myself, female, 23 of age, Form 6 graduate, hard working, good health, obedient, honest, diligent and considerate. If granted, I will do with all my might to face that challenge and fullfill the duties required. I'm looking for your early reply, thank you.
2011-11-21 3:44 am
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2011-11-20 6:44 pm
well... no offence but .. it's full of grammatical mistakes
here i prefer to say this -> i would like to apply to be a flight attendant because it suits me so much.
and here.. i am not the type of person who IS just looking for a stable and relaxed job;i would rather work in a highly pressure and exciting environment.
this is one of the few careers that can PROVIDE me a chance of entering a big family that has various types of people and opportunities to travel around the world.
sorry i don't understand what you mean here ->"there seems not much collection between a flight attendant and my past working experience"
but actually they are in the same category and can be REGARDED as a service industry.
When i was in an advertising agency,i advanced my capacity of TOLERATING ,and learnt to be calm handling things before deadlines and all those kinds of strict clients.these are a great lesson to learn how to survive in the very competitive world.
BECOMING a flight attendant will be another challenge and a bright future for me.
despite the mechanical mistakes,its still a terrible resume ...
i suggest you to write it with well-organized paragraph structure
INTRODUCTION - you wanna be a flight attendant
THREE BODY PARAGRAPHS - three reasons for why they should hire you
CONCLUSION - conclude your essay . you tell them you will do a great job if they hire you
here i prefer to say this -> i would like to apply to be a flight attendant because it suits me so much.
and here.. i am not the type of person who IS just looking for a stable and relaxed job;i would rather work in a highly pressure and exciting environment.
this is one of the few careers that can PROVIDE me a chance of entering a big family that has various types of people and opportunities to travel around the world.
sorry i don't understand what you mean here ->"there seems not much collection between a flight attendant and my past working experience"
but actually they are in the same category and can be REGARDED as a service industry.
When i was in an advertising agency,i advanced my capacity of TOLERATING ,and learnt to be calm handling things before deadlines and all those kinds of strict clients.these are a great lesson to learn how to survive in the very competitive world.
BECOMING a flight attendant will be another challenge and a bright future for me.
despite the mechanical mistakes,its still a terrible resume ...
i suggest you to write it with well-organized paragraph structure
INTRODUCTION - you wanna be a flight attendant
THREE BODY PARAGRAPHS - three reasons for why they should hire you
CONCLUSION - conclude your essay . you tell them you will do a great job if they hire you
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