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1. In/When preparing for your work space, you should make sure you have adequate space for your computer, printer, fax and storage. For security reasons, your working area should be off limits to your family and friends.

prepare your work space = make your work space ready
prepare for your work space = plan for your work space

2. I know that you will work satisfactorily at homeTan . The following basic guidelines should help you accomplish your work, and also enable us to keep adequate contact with you.

"homeTan" - the name of the company?


2011-11-16 10:58:01 補充：
2. 如果你的意思是 "遵守這些準則..." (observing the guidelines), I suggest putting a possessive pronoun in front of the sentence to make it clearer in meaning.

Your following these basic guidelines should help you accomplish your work, and ...

1. (While) preparing your work (place), you should make sure you have adequate space for your computer, printer, fax (machine) and storage. Because (of) security reasons, your working area should be (limited) (to your own use), (instead of your family and friends).

2. I know you will work satisfactorily at home(,) Tan. Following these basic guidelines (could) help you accomplish (accomplish) your work (and) keep (in) (close) contact (between you and us).

2011-11-17 23:29:30 補充：
Oh sorry, accomplish is duplicated...

1. Preparing your work space, you should make sure you have adequate space for your computer ,printer, fax and storage.Because of security reasons,your working area should be off limits to your family and friends.
because=因為,要跟全句(clause),because security reasons not satisfied
because of=因為,要跟名詞,例如security reason,動名詞-ing
2.I know that you will work satisfactorily at homeTan . Following these basic guidelines should help you accomplish your work, also enable us to keep adequate contact with you.
which前面通常跟名詞,that係百搭,常用尐,意思一樣,都係連接前後...