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Hello ! I am Selina .Today , I am going to talk about my hobbies . I have a lot of hobbies . My hobbies included skipping, sleeping, reading and writing stories on the internet . Let me tell you about my first hobby, skipping first. I skip every day . I like skipping very much because sports can make me healthier and is also a good way to keep fit . Doing sports can also make me happy . My second hobby is sleeping . When I am tired , I go to bed and sleep. What a nice thing sleeping is! It can make me feel relaxed. I like reading stories which people wrote on the Internet . I also like writing stories on the Internet . It is because when I write stories , people can read my stories . They can tell me their views and suggestions of the story . It is definetely a good way to improve my writing . This is the end of my presentation . Thank you for listening.


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2011-11-15 20:06:33 補充：
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2011-11-16 19:39:20 補充：
what do u think about listening pop music and go on facebook?
plz tell me if u agree with them XP

2011-11-17 20:45:48 補充：
then u think 1-2 la
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2011-11-18 22:26:33 補充：
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Hello ! I am Selina .Today , I am going to talk about my hobbies . I have a lot of hobbies . My hobbies are skipping,sleeping and reading story in the Internet. Let me tell you my first hobby----skipping . I go skipping every day . I like skipping very much because do sports can make me healthy and keep fit . Do sports can also make me happy . My second hobby is sleeping . When I am tired , I can go to the bed and sleep . What a nice thing ! Sleeping can make me relaxed . My third hobby is reading in the Internet. I like reading the people who wrote the story in the Internet . I also like writing the story in the Internet . It is because when I write the story , the people can come to read my writings . They can tell me where is wrong and their suggestion . It is a good way to improve my writing . This is the end of my presentation . Thank you for listening.


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