用英文介紹同學(20點!!)

hello everybody!
I want to introduce my friend to you.
His English name is Louis.
His age is about 14 years old.
He is not tall, but he looks handsome.
He live in Hongkong.
He has a pet, it is a cat.
He is study in NP2C.
When he has time, he would like to play football and do many sport.
He is very outgoing, he like make friend.
I am very like this friend, and happy for being his friend.

大致上照你的意思翻出來 發揮想像力是...?在幫你想一些介紹他的句子??

2011-11-10 11:09:52 補充：
哈哈..常常忘記一些文法的小細節
謝謝大大的提醒~~
我會再補足文法的不足>.

大家好!
Hello, everybody!
我今天要介紹我的夥伴.
Today, I'd like to introduce my partner.
他的英文名字叫louis
His English name is Louis.
他今年大約14歲
He's about 14 years old.
他不高,看起來很帥氣
He's not tall, but very handsome.
他住在香港
He lives in Hong Kong.
他有養一隻貓.
He has a cat.
他白天在np2c學校上課.
He's studying in NP2C.
在他閒暇的時間，他喜歡踢足球和其他很多的運動
When he is free, he likes playing soccer and many different sports.
她很活潑.外向.很喜歡交朋友
He's vivid, outgoing, and social.
我很喜歡他這個夥伴,也很高興能成為他的朋友
I like him very much, and happy to become his friend.
希望和他做一輩子的朋友
I hope I can make friends with him forever.

浩子 同學的解答文法好像不太對, 比如說
he live in Hongkong -> he lives in Hong Kong
he is study in NP2C -> he is studying in NP2C
do many sport -> do many sports
he like make friend -> he likes making friends
I am very like this friend -> I like this friend very much

Hello everyone,
Today, I would like to introduce my partner, Louis.
He is 14 years old, not really a tall guy, but is very good looking.
He lives in Hong Kong. He has a pet cat.
He studies at NP2C during the day.
He likes playing football and many other (different types of) sports when he has free time.
He is very dynamic and sporty and likes to make a lot of friends.
I really like this friend of mine, and I'm happy to be a friend of his.
I hope we can be friends forever.