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My classmate pats (pat少s) my head usually, and (原my改I) I feel (原IS not改it was) itwas not good. One day, came (原into 改in the) in the class with angry, roaring my name made megreet her at class end. I did so; teacher’s (原 teacher少 's ) began accord (原 acold me改 accord and) and asked me why Iwrite (原 writed去掉d) bad word on work-book. (原 wordbook 中間少-) I thought of a new classmate`s behave was very badimmediately and connected to this thing, I talked teacher that new classmatewas related to this thing. As investigating this thing deeply, my innocence wasnot far. Finally, teacher apologized me and called new classmate nod head toapologize for mistake what he did.

重新整理，比較好讀。

My classmate pats my head usually, and I feel itwas not good. One day, came in the class with angry, roaring my name made megreet her at class end. I did so; teacher’s began accord and asked me why Iwrite bad word on work-book. I thought of a new classmate`s behave was very badimmediately and connected to this thing, I talked teacher that new classmatewas related to this thing. As investigating this thing deeply, my innocence wasnot far .Finally, teacher apologized me and called new classmate nod head toapologize for mistake what he did.

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2011-10-31 09:37:19 補充：
itwas

修正，雅虎會移位
it was

2011-10-31 09:40:26 補充：
Megreet

修正
Me greet

Iwrite

修正
I write

就是不會寫 才問阿==

其實你要不要先把中文寫出來，因為這根本不是“英文寫作”，根本看不懂本身是要表達什麼。