幫忙check我的英文日記吧~~~

I got 305 score last Toeic's writing exam,
toeic 上次在writing的部份考了305分，

I scored 305 in the writing test of the last Toeic.

This time, my listening test score was 295,
這次在listening的部份考了295分，

I score 295 in the listening test of the current Toeic.

The total was just 600 score....
加起來剛好600分…

The total score is 600 even.


however, the almost big part of answer I need to guess about listening questions.
不過這次的listening有一大部份都在猜題

However, I have guessed the answers for a big portion of the listening test.

I still fail in English test of 600 score guarantee class.
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這600分保證班還是不及格啦~~~~

I still consider as a failure in the score-600-quaranteed class.


Don't get discouraged! just keep up with your effort, you will eventually get the score you want, cheer up !





2011-10-30 21:22:50 補充：
I think, it might be better to use:

"guarantee-to-score-600" class is closer to your Chinese meaning. I don't have a clear idea what it means originally, so I used "score-600-guarantee", now with your question, I understand what you mean.

2011-10-30 21:24:06 補充：
Also you consider to change that sentence to be:

I still flunk in the "guarantee-to-score-600" class.

2011-10-30 21:26:02 補充：
"flunk" is more specific for class-related failure. Failure is for all kind.

2011-10-30 21:27:11 補充：
mark and score are the same, but if it is related to exam, it is better to use "score".

2011-10-30 21:59:56 補充：
you know, when you read Chinese, your thought can switch to Chinese, and think in Chinese, so when I see "不及格", the first word came up to my mind is "failure", but if I saw it in English, then I definitely think "flunk".

2011-10-30 22:00:20 補充：
Just to let you have an idea the difference between thinking in English and Chinese.

多益考試若有聽力
另一部分是READING

toeic 上次在writing的部份考了305分Last time I got 305 marks on Toeic's exam for writing.這次在listening的部份考了295分，This time I got 295 marks for listening.加起來剛好600分…That makes up to a total of 600 marks exactly.(在這裡用"just"會使整句意思變掉。The total was just 600 = 總分"只有"600)不過這次的listening有一大部份都在猜題However, most of the things I answered for the listening exam were only guessed.(However, I guessed most of the answers for listening.)這600分保證班還是不及格啦（不懂什麼意思）考卷上的分數應該是marks，而score則是得分，如：問：Hey you had a perfect score on your exam?答：No I only got 80 marks.

2011-10-30 11:50:24 補充：
更正：

However, I have guessed most of the answers for listening.