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We have learnt from the Singapore Trade Commission that you are one of the biggest manufacturers of office furniture exporting to Europe and the United States. We would be grateful if you would send us details of your office furniture in wood and stainless steel together with the price list, payment terms and delivery times.

As one of the major importers of office furniture in Hong Kong, we have a chain of 24 retail outlets throughout the district. Our furniture has been widely used among many big companies like the Hong Kong Jockey Club, AIA Insurance and the Bank of East Asia for decades.

2011-10-29 14:30:40 補充：
delivery time (without "s") or delivery schedule.

2011-10-29 14:45:46 補充：
Note: "furniture" is an uncountable noun, so the verb must be singular. Use "by" instead of "among".
Our furniture has been widely used by many big companies for decades, like ...
Our furniture has always been popular among many big companies for decades, ...

只改文法(grammar), 保留笨拙的措詞和句法:

We (are learnt) (have learnt ) from the Singapore Trade Commission that you are one of the biggest manufacturers of office furnituree exporting to Europe and the United States. We (would grateful) (would be grateful)if details of your office furniture in wood and stainless steel together with your price list,
payment terms and delivery times (could send) (could be sent) to us .

As one of the major importers of office furniture in Hong Kong, we (had)(have) a chain of 24 retail
outlets throughout the district. Our furniture (widely use among) (are widely used by) many big companies like the Hong Kong Jockey Club,AIA Insurance and the Bank of East Asia for decades.

-------- Dear sir,I am pleased to state that your 3 business with Singapore Co have been successful had not been fully 3 grammatical errors corrected fully realized.-------------------------
(1)We have learnt
(2) are widely used
(3) have been widely used.