請幫我解答這句英文句子

It's hot .Can I put on jacket?

這句錯

首先, jacket 係 noun 應該加番冠詞 即 a jacket 或 the jacket

所以應該係

It's hot .Can I put on the jacket?

另外, put on 解作 穿上, 戴上

句子第一句話 好熱... 卻在後面問 可以穿上外套嗎???
不是沒有前言後理嗎?

所以應該可以改成
It's hot .Can I take off the jacket?
很熱啊~我可以把外套除下嗎?

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另外

I like the design on this jacket.

也是錯的

今次錯 preposition

句中design on 解作 圖謀[P][(+on/upon)]

應該將 on 改成 of

變成
I like the design of this jacket.
我很喜歡這件外套的設計。

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要說哪句比較正確的話, 第2句錯處比較少, 但也是錯

It's hot .Can I put on jacket?

--> It should be "It's hot. Can I put on a jacket.


I like the design on this jacket.

It should be "I like the design of this jacket."

not correct.....the true is l like the design of the jacket

2011-10-10 12:30:19 補充：
or...The weather is hot.Can l put thejacket

2011-10-10 12:30:35 補充：
the jacket