urgent!!英文grammar!!20點!!

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1. I become more outgoing (or,sociable) after I have found my true friends atschool...

2. as a result of getting other people’srecognition

3. In the following discussion, I am going to explain these two major changes for the past few months

4. At the beginning of this year, ... as I tried a several times...

5. a distance from them

6. I have met my best friend, Anna, in the middle of the year

7. she comes from a broken family, and that is the reason why she can understand and care about other people’s feelings

8. I have also made new friends at Club Asia

9. there are twenty of students coming from different countries other than Asian countries only

10. One of my closer friends is

11. gives a useful advice to me

12. Now I am a cheerful person and the outgoing personality helps make friends

13. I will no longer keep quiet but try to talk to strangers

14. Friends can affect your personality and all the decisions along your life's journey. So, it is important to choose the right friends who can be faithful to you in weal and woe.


2011-10-04 14:38:13 補充：
15. Confidence means certainty, credence, faith, optimism, reliance and trust in dictionary.

2011-10-04 14:38:20 補充：
16. I used to be lack of confidence and those words didn't mean anything to me. I guess the gradual change of my personality has somehow and somewhere picked myself up and those words have started to creep into my daily life.

2011-10-04 14:40:15 補充：
16. I used to lack of ....(correction)

2011-10-04 14:48:40 補充：
Sorry again, (16) I used to be lacking in confidence (or, I used to lack confidence)

2011-10-04 16:16:27 補充：
17. At the beginning of the year, I was very fearful of the English lesson as everyone said it would be very difficult to get a pass in level two English.

2011-10-04 16:16:33 補充：
18. Owing to my lack of confidence, I found everything so hard for me. I had no choice but to face it even though I had thought about giving up this subject.

2011-10-04 19:17:55 補充：
....see comments

2011-10-04 19:18:16 補充：
19. Then the time came for my turn to present my speech in the middle of the year. Friends around me encouraged me to strive for my future. I was motivated to do my best to work on the research of information, to write my speech and to present calmly in front of the class.

2011-10-04 19:28:17 補充：
20. I’d never thought I would pass, but surprisingly, my English teacher told me after the presentation that I got merit.

2011-10-04 20:12:58 補充：
20. ...My teacher and classmates praised me for my hard work.
21. After that assessment, I became confident of speaking English in public because ... I felt confident of writing my essay ... I regained my confidence because I gained recognition for my effort.

2011-10-04 20:32:11 補充：
22. Confidence not only changed my study but also changed my attitude towards others, as well as my perspective on life.

2011-10-04 20:39:27 補充：
23. We must not be afraid of change. Change for better is the key to success.

2011-10-05 17:25:05 補充：
I used to be very afraid of writing essay because I always got the grade as "not achieved". But I managed to hold my nerve when I sat in the mock exam in the middle of this year. I was happy to get the "achieved" grade on the essay writing when the teacher returned the papers.

2011-10-05 17:28:44 補充：
At that moment, I just thought I was dreaming as I failed my practice essay in English. (I don't know what you mean...)

2011-10-05 17:36:08 補充：
After that assessment and mock exam, I became confident of speaking English in public because I got "merit" in my speech. I felt confident of writng my essay in NCEA because I got "achieved" in the mock exam.

2011-10-05 17:41:20 補充：
try this:
I became confident of speaking English in public and writng my essay in NCEA after I had got the unexpectedly good results from the assessment and mock exam.