有關申請考試的英文請求信,請指教幫忙感謝!!

Dear Mr Tsoi,

Good morning sir/Hello.I'm XXX, i'm goin, i would like to apply for the independent study of the A-Level.

提供參考: I am a student who is about to apply for A-Level independent study, but has concern on the age regulation for this exam.

but The qualifier have has to be enough at least 20 years old before 1 jan 2012 Jan 1, 2012, and I will be 20 at by 30 April 2012 April 30, 2012; It will it's 只差 only be 4-month away.

提供參考: I fully understand that all applicants for such study program must be at least 20-year old by January 1, 2012. In my scenario, I will be just four months shy from such regulation.

I really wish that I plan to take can join this year exam the exam this year, cuz because I already missed one the chance last year. and i and my family all are 重視 this time so I am studying everyday and I believe I can will catch up with this the 進度 of the others the progress. (建議:這邊講家人重視不如講自己重視)

提供參考: I truly weigh this opportunity heavily. I missed the regular exam this year, and therefore, I see this this venue as my second chance to get into the program. I am studying hard and am striving to make up the progress. I am confident that my persistence will grant me with the success, only with your help.

But this is the finally year for A level, I can't give up that! So, I am earnestly requesting you to make grant me a exception to 賜予 me a chance for the this exam. I promise i'll work more harder!

提供參考: With hope, I ask for your approval to kindly grant me the opportunity to take this exam.


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Dear Mr. Tsoi I am going to reply to A LEVEL as a self-study student. However, I will have been 20 years old by 30 April in2012, which is only after four month from now, that I could qualify to a self-study student. I had lost a prior opportunity. For this time will be the last A LEVEL exam, I had been preparing hard for months. I and my family are looking forward to this exam. I wonder if you could possibly grand me a chance to take the exam, I’d be much appreciated of it. I look forward to your reply. Yours sincerely


p.s. There are many opportunities but quite few chances. You may want to grabe every opportunity.