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I think I am a Bee.Because I work and learn seriously.Just like a bee which would save a lot of honey for the coming winter.So, I think my character is similar to that of a bee.I keep on learning Japanese

Since I hope to work in a Japanese company.Also, I like working as a team.When I was working in XX Company

I help the staff who are not familiar with the product

And don’t know how to speak JapaneseHow to serve the customers and make them enjoy our service.These are the reasons why I think I am a bee.

Thank you.



2011-09-18 08:19:10 補充：
如果件事過咗去就用 past tense

When I was working in XX Company

I helped the staff who were not familiar with the product

And didn’t know how to speak Japanese

How to serve the customers and make them enjoy our service.

I thank I am a Bee.
thinkBecause I amseriously to working and learning.
I am As a bee save a lot of honey to stand by over winter.So, I think my character is look like a bee.As same as I hope to join a Japanese company then keep onlearning Japanese.
on learningAlso, I like a bee have teamwork.Like when I was working in XX Company help other don’t knowabout product and don’t speak Japanese staff,
know aboutHow to serve the customers and enjoy our service.These are I thank I am a bee reason
think
Thankyou.


thank you