再徵求幫作english writing 1篇(20分)

我中二架咋 作得差唔好怪我 -3-

My brother gave me a map some years ago,although I thought it was preposterous,I lost all my money and became poor this year.My brother told me to go on the treasure hunt and try to earn some money.Therefore,I started our trip.

It was a exciting and dangerous adventure.On the first day we reached,we shocked by the island where was on the map.The island was very big but missy-it seems there were no one go to the island for a long time.We were tired and slept on the ship.

On the second day,we heard some big noise and we wake up.We were afraid but curious,so we took a torch and tried to find where the noise came from.Unluckily,we found that it was from a tiger.The tiger was hungey and chased after us.We ran and ran and ran.At least escape from it.After we stopped running,we suddenly discovered that this place was closed to the treasure location on the map.

On the third day,we found the location of buried treasure,we digged and digged.The treasure was very hard to found out.We felt hot and hungry.However we just thought about the life after we sold the treasure and didn't felt tired.Finally,we found a box which is made of gold and jewels.We were very nervous and can not waited to open it.We opened the big box and it was empty inside.We felt very sad and disappointed.When we readied to leave,my brother yelled happily,'the box was the treasure!It was made by gold and sliver!It is ture that there was a treasure in the island!' Therefore,we took the box and walked quickly to our ship.We took out some food and clean water to drink.Then we drove the ship and backed to our hometown.After we arrived at our town,we ran as fast as a flash to a shop which buys gold and jewels.The worker gave us many money and we became rich and have lighthearted life with our family.字數有320字,小妹真係中二,英文差就唔好介意,希望D IDEA可以幫到你 :$:$

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