想請問呢篇文出現既問題,同埋有冇睇吾明既地方,因我英文太差...吾該哂各位了...^^,,
In february, i reached my dream vacation in hawaii. In my dream vacation i am have a good swim in the sea. I am with my friends and we are camping on an isolated beach. There is nobody around miles, not a soul. The water is aqua, and not too cold, not too warm. We flight from hong kong to USA, then from Maui Lahaina harbor boar cruises to Hawaii, the whole process is very happy, because the process we can be seen in the beautiful scenery,That day was really good weather, there are many clouds.
I like playing basketball, but not here, I can only play volleyball and swimming. I like to eat more food, but using healthier portions and ingredients. such as fruits, vegetables,cheese,yogurt, chicken and All sweet and sour dishes. Restaurants in Hawaii I also enjoy delicious Hawaiian chicken rice and coconut milk sauce. The people like to enjoy a quiet early morning walk on the beach just as the sun lights up the turquoise water, to smell the sweet fragrance of just-blooming ginger, or to hear the thundering music of a waterfall in Hawaii.
When we travel, we try to bring back distinctive, but not too expensive, souvenirs for family and friends. I bought myself a beautiful Aloha shirt and skirt, very special and delicate. 在二月，我在夏威夷达成我的梦想假期。在我的梦想假期，我有一个良好的海上畅游。我与我的朋友，我们是一个孤立的海滩上露营。有无人周围英里，而不是灵魂。水是旱厕，不太冷，不太热情。我们从香港到美国的航班，然后从毛伊岛的拉海纳港口野猪邮轮到夏威夷，整个过程非常高兴，因为我们可以看到在风景秀丽的过程中，这一天，天气真的很好，有很多云。
我喜欢打篮球，但不是在这里，我只能打排球和游泳。我喜欢吃更多的食物，但使用健康的部分和成分。如水果，蔬菜，奶酪，酸奶，鸡肉和所有的酸甜可口的菜肴。在夏威夷的餐厅，我也很享受美味的夏威夷鸡肉饭和椰奶酱。人们喜欢享受一个安静的清晨散步，在沙滩上了碧绿的水，太阳灯，闻到香味刚刚绽放姜，或听到雷鸣般的瀑布在夏威夷音乐。
当我们旅行的时候，我们试图带回鲜明，但不是太昂贵，为家人和朋友的纪念品。我给自己买一个美丽的阿罗哈衫和裙子，非常特殊和微妙的。
想請問呢篇文出現既問題
2011-08-30 10:44 am
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2011-08-30 6:01 pm
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In February,I dreamed that I had experienced an enjoyable vacation in Hawaii. During the vacation, I had a nice tour around the sea. Then, my friends and I had camping on the isolated beach where was nobody or not even a soul along a mile distance; the water temperatures were neither too cold nor too warm there. Regarding our trip, having left Hongkong for Hawaii,USA; at first via Port Lahaina,Maui by air and then from port Lahaina to Hawaii by local cruising. As that trip had been a very exciting one,then we could see the beautiful scenery with lots of cloud on a fine day.Though I was very fond of playing volley ball yet that was not the right place, it could only play basket ball and swimming. In order to eat healthy portions and ingrediants of food, I would like to enjoy more of them, such as fruits,vegetables,cheese,yoghourt, chicken meat and all kinds of sweet and sour juicy gourmet. In addition, I also enjoyed dining out in Hawaii's especially its chicken meat and coconut milk sauce. Here, people had enjoying a stroll during early tranquil morning to see the clearly greenish sea waves,sunlight and smelling the fragrant flavour or hearing the Hawiian music like waterfall's roaring as thunder.
During the trip, we would bring some kinds of souvenirs back with which being peculiar and not very expensive for family members as well as friends. At the sametime, I had bought for myself a beautiful Aloha-printed shirt and skirt that were very special and chaming.
2011-08-30 10:52:48 補充：
Admendments: local cruising might better be changed into local ferry or local hovercraft or local hydrofoil : because they are the ship or ferry or special vehicle used in transportation at sea among the islets of Hawaii, Mauai and .Oahu.
2011-08-30 5:50 pm
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