點改呢2句句子? (10點)

2011-08-24 5:10 am
我想講的是:我決定不上線超過3日的會員將會被踢出

點改呢2句句子?

1. I decided that the members that not online exceed 3 days will be kicked.

2. I decided that the members that don't login exceed 3 days will be kicked.

同埋我想問當中的exceed是作動詞用嗎?

回答 (3)

2011-08-28 5:08 pm
✔ 最佳答案
Q.: 我決定不上線超過3日的會員將會被踢出

My suggestion:
I have decided that members not logging on for more than 3 days will be kicked off (the group).

同埋我想問當中的exceed是作動詞用嗎?
"exceed" itself is a verb, but it is wrongly used in the sentence.
參考: Oxford Advanced Learner's Eng-Chin dictionary
2011-08-29 6:31 pm
I have decided that members who do not log in for more than 3 days will be kicked off.

what a decision!

2011-08-29 10:33:14 補充:
or if its formal, you could say
It is decided that members not logging in for more than 3 days will be kicked off.
2011-08-24 7:15 am
I decided that the members who haven't logged in for more than 3 days will be kicked.

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