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2011-08-22 4:34 am

Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved then way people live?

With the rapid development oftechnology, food has become easier to prepare. We can use many different kindsof equipment in the kitchen or even have dinner in the restaurant. I thinkthis change has improved the way people live. Below I will describe my views.First of all, preparing foodeasily, we have many different kind of cooking equipments in the kitchen. Forexample, refrigerator, microwave etc. the former help us keep the food and thelater help us cook the food. These equipments make preparing food easily. Inaddition, most of them are safety and convenient. Secondly, saving our time, noeverybody has much time to cook or has their family. In these cases,restaurants and instant food are our good choice. There are many differentkinds of food in restaurants. For example, fast food, Chinese food, Japanesefood etc. Different restaurants cater to people who come from differentcountries and save their precious time. On the side, instant food is not anutritious food but it has different tastes to cater different people. It evensaves our time more efficiently. Thirdly, nutritious food,organic food has become a heated trend in parts of world. It is a nutritiousand natural food. The most important thing is it does not contain insecticideand other chemical substances. Therefore, it is popular with housewives. On theside, most of food has their own information. For example, ingredients,calories etc. These can help us choose more nutritious food. Last but notleast, every region or country has their own department of examination, whichassures the public of food safety. In conclusion, preparing foodeasily, saving our time, nutritious food etc. These make our lives morecomfortable, convenient and safer. This change has improved the way peoplelive.

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2011-08-22 1:41 pm

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Nowadays, food has become more easier to prepare, has this changed people's way of living?
With the rapid development of technology, food has been becoming more easier to prepare. People can choose a variety of kitchen appliances or to dine out that has changed their way of living. Regarding that my points of view are as follows;
Firstly,to prepare food easily, people can choose a variety of kitchen appliances, for example; the refrigerator and the microwave, the former help to keep the food safely while the latter help to cook the food faster. All of them help people prepare food more safely and conveniently.
Secondly, to save time, neither everybody got enough time to cooking nor his family. In such case, people often dine in the retaurants with Chinese, Mandarin, and Japanese styles of gourmet food. Though these kinds of gourmet food are with different good tastes and yet they are too concentrated and greasy as far as nutritions being concerned.
Thirdly, the standardized food, it is the recent trend that nutritive or organic food have become popular, because they are free from chemicals, insecticides and other harmful substances. In addition, the government have always concerned about the safety and nutritive standards of the food so as to lay down the regulations and rules to guarantee no harmfull effects.
In conclusion, the recent development of kitchen appliances has enabled to prepare food easily. As a result, this will make life more comfortable, convenient and safer,then that will change people's way of living.

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