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Who is your role model? My is someone who is only a few years older than
me. He is inventor and his name is Chan Yik-hei. He is my role model because
he has shown that young people can achieve a lot by them.
In 2004, when he was only fourteen years old, Chan Yik-hei invented robot that
he designed and made him. He entered it into a competition organised by the
computer company Intel, and he won second prize! It was such a achievement
for a young person that Chan now has planet named after him called Chanyikhei!
When Chan was at the school, he enjoyed learning new things, and always
asked his teachers lots of questions. He often took apart the electrical appliances
and toys, and taught him a lot by putting them back together again.
Chan's father has helped his son a lot. Once, when Chan Yik-heiis not allowed
to take a technology course because he was not the adult, his father took it for
him and taught him everything that she had learnt.
The young inventor is now studying electronics and computer courses at an
university. He has also written two books about he story and his ideas for new
inventions. He has achieved a lot in his life already so he must be very proud
of him!