proof reading x6

1) What is too unique is that not only is it free and easy to use,it also allowsuesrs to go in and edit an entry.

delete "too", WHY??Ans. Because to use/write "too" here is Chinglish 「太」，but unique means one-of-a-kind, there is no such thing as "too unique". You cannot compare something relatively if it is "unique", special, distinct or ideal.

2) Just minutes after when the article hit the site,it was amended by Wikipedia's followers.

delete " when" WHY??

AFTER and WHEN are both conjunction, you cannot have two conjunction next to each other or one after another. The meaning of the sentence is that "shortly after the article is put onto the webpage", which is to indicate the relative time between the amendment action and the original article input, so only use "after" to mark a relative time.

3) The liver regulates shen,influencing on emotional responses in particular.

delete " on" WHY??

no proposition required for the present participle "influencing emotional responses..."

4) Good lifestyle choices are also important foe a peaceful mind, which helps to slow down the age of shen in the heart.

change "age"to "aging" or "ageing" WHY??

The meaning fo the sentence implies the processing of aging, getting old or deteriorating process of shen, not the age (n. = number of year of life) of the shen.

5) An adequate amount of sleep, and head and foot massage are also good for calming to the mind.

delete " to" WHY??

calming (ing) does not follow "to"

6) While Yeung doesn't mind to being corrected by complete strangers, the site's free-for-all editing may be upset other people.

delete"to" and "be" WHY??

to be or being, either or, cannot have both "to" and "being".
may be - means perhaps/possible/probably; the eidting may upset other people means "able to". may <> may be <> maybe: three different meanings

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