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Dear Ben,
Thank you for your e-mail.I am sorry to know that you have an argue with your mum over the past few weeks.I understand that teenagers have that part of live.I have my idols,too.But did you put too much time in supporting your idols' activities,like bougut their concert's ticket and go to their concerts,or went to karoate to sing their songs for too long time?It isn't right.You should only put a little time for your idols,like one hour per week is a nice way.I believe that if you try your hard to decrease the time waste by supporting your idols,you and your mum will agrue fewer,even none,and she may give you back your pocket money!You may support your idols at that time!I suggest you should also put lesser money in buying your idols card or somerthing like souvenirs,Or something that have their photos and signature.These things are unuseful.But you can buy a bit.Just decrease the numbers or times of you buy it.I think,you buy one card or souvenir of your idols is possible and okay.
I hope my advice is helpful to you.Waiting for your good news!
Cheers,
Chris

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