主題:seasons
My favourite season is winter. It is because I can have a Christmas party at
Christmas .On that day, I can eat delicious food such as turkey . Although the
weather is cold , I like this season very much.Moreover , I like summer too. I
like going to the beach. I like swimming and building a sand castle. At
spring,It always wet so I hate this weather.
這篇文章有無錯??(presentation)很趕.....
2011-07-03 1:42 am
回答 (3)
2011-07-03 3:20 am
✔ 最佳答案
文章第一句改做My favourite season is winter because I can have a Christmas party at Christmas.會比較好,On that day, I can eat delicious food such as turkey如果可以再舉多一兩個例子會比較好,文法方面沒有問題(小弟用mircosoft word對過了)
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2011-10-12 4:17 am
I like dry so I hate this weather
改做
I hate wet so I don't like this weather
or
I don't like this weather because I hate wet .
改做
I hate wet so I don't like this weather
or
I don't like this weather because I hate wet .
2011-07-03 5:37 am
主題:seasons
My favourite season is winter. It is because I can have a Christmas party at Christmas .On that day,I can eat delicious food , such as turkey . Although theweather is cold , I like this season very much.Moreover , I like summer too. I
like going to the beach. I like swimming and building a sand castle
In spring time,It is so I hate this weather.
food後面要加,
At spring 改為In spring time,
It always改為It is
我只是改你篇文章內的文法是否有錯
希望幫到你.
My favourite season is winter. It is because I can have a Christmas party at Christmas .On that day,I can eat delicious food , such as turkey . Although theweather is cold , I like this season very much.Moreover , I like summer too. I
like going to the beach. I like swimming and building a sand castle
In spring time,It is so I hate this weather.
food後面要加,
At spring 改為In spring time,
It always改為It is
我只是改你篇文章內的文法是否有錯
希望幫到你.
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