我想問呢兩句有咩唔o岩?可以點改?

老師話第二句的 'the card' 錯左?點解會錯?

It is because students need to use the card to entry some places.

The above written sentence is a complete sentence and can stand alone itself. Thus, when you read through this sentence, do you know which card that you are referring? Therefore, you have to specific it. You don't have to rewrite it into a relative clause because you don't have to.


relative clause'.但我又唔係好明,如果要加,加係邊?

First, students must remember to bring their student ID, which is for students to enter some places.


我想問呢,我可唔可以話 'It is because the students who have the student card need to use the card to entry some places' ?

Yes, it can be, but there's an error in your sentence.

It's because the students who have the student card need to use it to ENTER some places.

又或者 'It is because students need to use the card which belongs to them to entry some places' ?

I don't think your second sentence works!

This is my attempt:

Student ID must be worn at all time in school especially when they have to enter some specific areas of the school.

我第一眼只覺得你錯在沒有使用代名詞, 同埋用錯entry.

It is because students need to use "it" to enter (not entry) some places.

比較: 中文裡, 代名詞只常用於代人, 少用於代物. 你試想自己生活中有多少次會用"佢"字來代物, 通常我地粵語會講 "舊野/架車/粒星/部機..."甚少用個"佢"字來指一件東西/車/星/機.... 相比下, 英艾更常使用代詞指物.

真的是要用relative clause嗎? 我沒意見了.

First, students must remember to bring their student card

which students need to using it to entry some places.( 用which關係連詞作clause.)

is because students need to use thire student card to entry some places.