我的翻譯,不知道是否三句都可以,希望可以用文法解說!

1. He told me that he quit smoking and that surprised me.
(他告訴我他戒煙了,這讓我感到驚訝!)
2..He told me that he quit somking and I surprised for that.
(他告訴我他戒煙了,我為這感到驚訝!)
3..He told me , he quit smoking , I surprised for that.
(他告訴我, 他戒煙了, 我為這感到驚訝!)
1. He told me that he quit smokingand that surprised me. (O)
2. He told me that he quit smoking and I was surprised at (by) that (it).
Note: somebody be surprised at (by) something
3. He told me, he quit smoking, I surprised for that. (X)A. He told me thathe quit smoking and I was surprised at it.B. He told me hequit smoking and I was surprised at that. Note: he quit smoking是told的直接受詞，連接詞that可省略
C. He told me: “He quit smoking.”I was surprised at that.

似乎應該用過去完成式：He told me (that) he had quit smoking and ...

老登來回答


1. He told me that he quit smoking and that surprised me.

OK

2. He told me that he quit smoking and I was surprised for that.

I 子句要用被動,因我是被驚訝的

ˇ3. He told me he quit smoking and I was surprised.

逗號拿掉, he quit....是受詞補語, I....要被動, for that 可省略

希望有幫助

2011-06-06 15:13:53 補充：
意見區 Ed 好友的建議也是老登一直在思考,是否應用過去完成式,

照理講應該用 過去完成式的.

He told me that he had quit smoking and that surprised me.

He told me that he had quit smoking and I was surprised for that.

He told me he had quit smoking and I was surprised.

或註明過去時間

He told me that he quit smoking yeserday all day but in vain.