幾個日常英語的問題?

上學篇:
我xx點-xx點要上堂: I have got lessons from XX til XX.
我xx點放學: I finish school at XX.
我番緊屋企: I'm going home now.

出街篇:
你幾時得閒,我地出去玩呀?: When will you be free? Let's hang out together.
我地幾時去街呀?: When are we going out?

與外國人溝通篇:
你離左香港幾耐呀?: How long have you been in HK?
你去過香港咩地方呀?: Where have you been in HK?
你會留係香港幾耐呀?: How long are you gonna stay in HK?
你係暫住定係移左民?: Are you just living for a while, or are u a citizen already?
我英文唔係咁好,可能溝通時會出現一些文法上的錯誤,希望你唔好介意同埋可以糾正我:
I'm not very good at English, so might have some grammatical mistakes. I hope you don't mind and you could correct my mistakes if there's any.

其他:
sorry , 我遲左send mail /聯絡你: Sorry to contact you so late.
好開心聽到你咁講: I'm so happy to hear that.