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我作左篇文，翻譯為英文，但一定有好多錯處，所以請大家幫幫忙，改一改 THZ


我認為，在控制旅行許可證方面，香港旅遊發展局應控制旅遊牌，防止導遊強迫遊客購買紀念品，建立良好的reputation
I　think the Hong Kong Tourism Board, through advertising to other countries and cities to promote Hong Kong attractions to attract tourists to Hong Kong. For example, the Hong Kong Tourism Board on the Internet through facebook, to other countries and cities to promote Hong Kong has a "food paradise" and "shopping paradise ". And with the Internet than on television propaganda propaganda cheaperIn my opinion, In control the travel licenses aspect, the Hong Kong Tourism Board should control the travel licenses, prevent the guides compel the tourists buy the souvenirs, build up a good reputation政府應立例規管旅行社和導遊，如果他們違反了法例受到罰款。如果嚴重就要取消牌照。這麼就可以阻嚇旅行社和導遊為了賺錢而強迫遊客購買紀念品。The Government should introduce legislation to regulate travel agents and tour guides, if they violate the law will be fined. If you must cancel a license seriously. This will deter travel agencies and tour guides to make money forcing visitors to buy souvenirs.
香港旅遊發展局應提供更多的培訓給導遊，這樣就可以維持導遊的質素。吸引更多遊客前往香港
Hong Kong Tourism Board should provide more training for the guides, so you can maintain that the quality of tour guides. Attract more tourists to Hong Kong
無論發生什麼事，例如發生交通意外，要立刻通知旅行社，方便旅行社即時解決問題。同時也要接受旅客的意見，改善公司的服務，
No matter what happens, for example, a traffic accident, immediately inform the travel agents, travel agents easy to solve the problem immediately. Must also accept the views of passengers and improve the company's services,