我想寫復活節有咩做.
我英文差,希望各位幫幫手。
睇下有咩錯咗,同我講番,
同理個感想我想唔到,希望大家幫幫手,想下
感激不盡!!
I look forward to easter hoilday, it is because Easter is Jesus bring back
to life day, very merit us to to commemorate .
In the holiday ,i will with my family go to church celebrate Easter. going
to buy many chocolater. we wll have Easter dinnerＯn Easter friday , l will wtih my friend go to elementary school
teacher home barbecue .l very look forward .on Ｅaster sunday, i with my parents going to church celebrate Easter.
next,we will to buy many Easter eggs and chocolates. finallly ,we wii
to have very special dinner .The dinner staple food is chocolates, such as
chocolate Easter eggs , chocolate ice cream , chocolater pudding......l think l wii like this holiday ,because i can eat many good food .
幫手see下我篇文岩岩,(ENG) 唔該
2011-04-29 1:19 am
回答 (1)
2011-04-29 2:21 am
✔ 最佳答案
我英文唔算好，我就係到試試。Easter, the day where Jesus brings back to life, is so important that should be commemorated. Because of this reason, I believe I will have an enjoyful Ester holiday.
During holidays, I, with my family, plans to visit the church to celebrate Easter.
Moreover, we will do some shpping and buy chocolaters.
We will also have a special dinner to celebrate Ester.On friday, l, wtih my friend(s), will go to my primary school
teacher's home and have barbecue. l am looking forward to meeting my teacher.On sunday, I will go to church again to celebrate Easter with my parents.
Next,we will do some shopping and buy Easter eggs and chocolates.
Finallly ,we will have a special dinner. The main ingrediants used in the dinner is chocolates, such as chocolate eggs, chocolate ice cream, chocolater pudding......l think l will enjoy my Ester holiday, as I can eat those food I like.
希望有幾點你可以留意一下
第一，香港一般唔會用elemental school。E個字一般會係美國人先用
第二，will 之後唔使加to, 直接用infinitive 就可以
第三，請check一check spelling, 一直出現好多wii
第四，staple food冇記錯係解主食。咩係主食呢?好似香港人食米，外國人食小麥。
第五，唔好成日用very，中文都唔會句句都加十分啦?
第六，一般comma直接跟係句未，之後先一個空格再接蓉去
第七，I 要大階
第八，留意一下with的用法，用左要換位
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