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2011-04-16 8:33 pm

People have more education the cities will be more civilized. Education is important as it teaches us the right behaviour and cultivates us into mature citizen. The basis of culture and civilization is education.Some cities always to fall behind others because they do not have good education.The education is a main factor to change the quality of the city. Education is important for the economic growth of the city.People with high education level can get more job opportunities and wider choice of jobs. The people with low education level always work in primary industry and secondary industry.That will hinder the developing of the city. The people with higher education level always work in tertiary industry.That can boost the economic growth of the city. For example, Hong Kong. Eventually, that will increase the living standard of people and quality of the city.

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2011-04-16 11:23 pm

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The cities will be more civilized if the people receive more education.
Education is important as it provides us knowledge on the right behaviour
and we will be cultivated into mature citizens.
The basis of culture and civilization is education.
Some cities always fall behind the others because the people do not receive good education.
Education is an important factor which affects the quality of the city.
Education is also important for the economic growth of the city.
People with higher education level can get more job opportunities
and a wider choice of jobs.
People with lower education level always work in primary industry
and secondary industry.
This hinders the development of the city.
People with higher education level always work in tertiary industry.
This boosts the economic growth of the city.For example, Hong Kong. Eventually, this increases the living standard of people and thequality of the city.

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