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老登很樂意為版主回答 What are the advantages and disadvantages of working in the same place (as) with other members (of) in your family? (must be organized in an essay format.) I had bad memories being with my mother. When I was a child, I helped my mom every weekend. Even now after I grow up, I do the same things. Sometimes I still need to help my mom. After graduating from college. I worked as an accountant in my mom’s company for one year. My boss was my mom. How did we separate our different position? In office, she was my boss. I had to do everything and listened to her. We talked about works a lot. All coworker looked at me . I got more pressure and responsibility. At home, we still talked about office works continuously . So working with your family, you will do more works than othe people in the office . Because you are easy to reach . And you can not refuse it. But it is s also a good thing to work with your family. You don’t need to find a job everywhere. Even you don’t have any experience you still get the job . You can do the work you like in yours family’s company. And you will learn a lot with your family. Because you are a part of the family. When you make a mistake they also forgive you. Working with your family are the advantages and disadvantages at the same. It depends how you look at it . The attitude is very important. The advantages of working in your family should be cherishing. The disadvantages should be turned to be your power. I think these disadvantages will also happen in other companies. But the advantages would not be the same. 最後一句不懂版主之意


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2011-04-15 15:52:18 補充：
你提到的 advantage and disadvantage 是有啦,只是不很多, OK 啦!

最後一句請改成:

To my opinions, working with my own families in our own company is much better than working for someone else.

公司內部的工作,我都改成work 不用 job

剛好路過，只看到working with my own families in our own company這部份。

如果就是你自家的公司，就用family business。簡潔易懂，一看就知道是自己家開公司（做生意）。參考囉！

Other companies do not have the advantage in our company.
其他公司並沒有在我們公司的優勢。

全部是人手翻譯!