一句簡單的英文翻譯

Hi ! I am the first group of form 1B class. We want everybody to write this survey. The target is to make the classroom tidy and clean. It can provide a good comfortable learning environment for students. The following questions are as follows:


''你好,我是中一b班的第一組,我們要大家填這份問卷目的
是希望能把課室改善得更好,使同學有更舒適的學習環境,問題如下:''

2011-04-13 00:48:02 補充：
希望可以幫到你!

After looking through all the answers, the one by Godfrey should be the best. At least, there are no grammatical mistakes.

Hi, I am a member of the first group in F1B. In order to provide you a more comfortable and better learning environment, we need you to fill in this questionnaire which aims to improve the quality of classroom. The questions are as follow.

Hello, I am the first group of Form 1B. Weinvite all of you to fill in this questionnaire so as to improve the classroomin order to provide a better study environment for all students. The questionsas follows:highlight 左的地方, 我認為用we are (我們)比較恰當.


2011-04-14 16:06:44 補充：
少許更正:
Hello, I am the first group of Form 1B. We invite all of you to fill in this questionnaire so as to improve the classroom in order to provide a better study environment for all students. The questionsas follows:

hallo, I am b the class's first group, we want everybody to fill in this questionnaire goal are the hope can improve well the classroom, enables schoolmate to have more comfortable learning environment,

Hello, I'm group one of form 1b, we have to fill all the purpose of this questionnaire aims to improve the classroom, so students have a more comfortable learning environment, the question is as follows:

Hello, I'm one of the first group b class, we must all fill in this questionnaire aims to improve the classroom better able to ensure students have a more comfortable learning environment, the problem is as follows

答:
＂hello,I am grade one of middle school the group one in class B,we want to everybody fill out in the questionnaire purpose is hoping to classrooms ,will improve students have more comfortable study environment, the question below: ＂

Hi, I am from group one of form 1B class, could you please fill in this questionnaire on ways to improve the environment of the class rooms, the questions are as follows:

''Hello, I'm one of the first group b class, we have to fill all the purpose of this questionnaire
Is to be better able to improve the classroom, so students have a more comfortable learning environment, the question is as follows:''