Postponement notice ??

You betrayed her

2011-04-12 12:04 pm

memo
to : All classmates, Workplace English class 008
From : Catherine Au, Class Representative
Date : 6 Jun 2010
Subject : Changing of final exam date

About the postponement notice : to inform us need to attend the final exam on 20 Jun 2010 at Tuesday morning. I understand my classmates are very busy in under tight city , so we may absence the exam.

I would like to collect our opinion then prefer what date and time of exam. When we will have a common consent . I will send message Mr. Tang to confirm the new date prompty.

Please give me you all information before 11 Jun 2010 for the arrangements. My email is [email protected] or you can contact to me at 93129489

I look forward to receiving you all reply as soon as poossible.

請看看以上memo grammar 錯在那?
尤其 ( 節奏急速的城市底下 ) ( 當我們達到一致共識 )

回答 (1)

Jenkin

2011-04-12 7:47 pm

✔ 最佳答案

唔好意思要說全篇的文法和句式以及寫的對象講法都不妥。實在無法每樣指出，試看看改寫吧。你是寫給你同學吧...
尤其 ( 節奏急速的城市底下 ) ( 當我們達到一致共識 ) 這兩句是全錯。

We have been infomed to attend the final exam on 20 Jun 2010 (Tuesday) morning. I understand you are all very busy with your normal working schedule, so some of us may not be able to take the exam on this date.

I would like to collect your opinion on a preferred date and time for the exam. When we come up with an agreement. I will send message Mr. Tang to confirm the new date prompty.

Please give me your perference before 11 Jun 2010 for the arrangements. My email is [email protected] or you can contact to me at 93129489

I look forward to receiving you all reply as soon as poossible.

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