HELP - 幫下翻譯英文-急

Dear xxx.
我想知道之前你幫我申請份 job 進展如何, 有冇其他 job 符合我. 多謝你的幫忙


Dear xxx,

I wish to know the progress of the application form submitted regarding the vacancy.
Would there be any other posts suited my qualification?
Thanks a lot regarding this matter.

Your faithfully,
xxx

nb: before you've obtained the wanted post sucessfully,
usually, we name this a "post or vacancy", not 'job'.

Dear xxx.
I want to know before, how do you help me to apply for share job to progress, has other job to conform to me. Many thanks your help

Date: xxxx

Dear XXX,

Please kindly advise the status of my application and advise if there is any opportunity for an interview.

Thanks for your kind attention to this matter and look forward to having your reply.

Yours sincerely,
xxxxxx

Dear xxx,

Please could you advise me of any progress with regards to my job application that you had previously helped me with, and if there are any other suitable vacancies currently available ?

Many many thanks for you help.