唔該幫我睇一睇英文報紙讀後感

A man seized the microphone from the government minister Eva Cheng Yu-Wah on the stage in Central yesterday. The protesters blamed Cheng that under the for the price rise of her fare-adjustment mechanism, the prices of the MTR tickets are quite costly although they are still affordable for most of us. The act of the MTR Corporation is in fact lacking of social responsibility as it has continuously been making huge profits, apparently, neglecting the interest of the general public.
After reading this newspaper, I agree with the protesters that [they should have a demonstration] (General meaning is understandable, but you express it wrongly), but I don't agree with the protesters for their violent behaviour, the protests should be demonstrated in orderly and people should not barely adopt the performance of them without using their critical analysis.

A man seized the microphone from the Secretary of Housing and Transport, Eva Cheng Yu-Wah, on a stage in the MTR Central Station yesterday. This action is triggered by anger of the protesters, blaming Cheng for the increasing prices due to her "fare-adjustment mechanism", and also insisting a MTR's fare increase even after making a huge profit.
After reading the article, I agree with the protester for having a demostration to express their views, but in my opinion the protesters should not carry out violent actions or uncivilised behaviours. The protests should be orderly so their views would be taken in by the government and be considered, moreover this poses a bad example for the younger generations and may cause futher aggression.

一個人昨天缴获了從政府部長伊娃・一個階段的城Yu-Wah的話筒在中央。 抗議者由於她的"的价格上升責備了城; 車費調整mechanism" 在获得巨大的利润以后，和想堅持MTR的車費增量。
在讀這張報紙以后。 我同意抗議者他們應該有demostration，但是我不同意猛烈行為的抗議者，抗議應該是井然的，並且人们不應該從他們學會。