help我作一篇小學六年級的英文日記

Today i was happy because i visited the elder"s home,It was meaningful for me.
In the morning,i went to the community centre ,i visited the elder"s home with tour.We went to grandma Kitty"s home frist,She lived with herself,she said she was lonely.Our tour talk to her and play with her.After,we went to another elder"s home too~
I like this work,this work can make elders more happy.In the future,if had any these work,i will join it!

2011-04-14 18:59:29 補充：
i hope i can help you~~