一小段英文自我介紹潤飾

2011-04-10 10:40 pm
大家好

想勞煩各位英文高手 幫我潤飾下面這一小段英文自我介紹的內容

字詞如果有更好的字可以替換沒關係


謝謝您的幫助:)



When I worked in XXX(公司), what I should do is numerous and diverse.

During the period, I've learned about well down in time plan, consummation

and effectiveness to complete each matter.

I think these experiences are important in this job.


=============中文想表達的意思

當我在XXX公司的時候,每天我所要做的事情很多而且很繁雜。
在那段期間,我學習到了做好時間規劃、完善並有效率的完成每一件事。
我覺得這些經驗對於這份工作(指的是要去面試的那份工作)而言是重要的。

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再次感謝您的指教

謝謝
更新1:

謝謝"天助人助自助"前輩: 真的要非常謝謝您,給了我非常棒的建議!! 不小得能不能再請您賜教 On the other hand, I have computer software application license. Such as excel, PowerPoint, or web page design are skilled for me. I think those skills can made me more powerful when dealing with assignments.

更新2:

(在另一方面,我有電腦軟體應用證照,例如excel、powerpoint、或網頁設計這些對我而言都很熟練。我想這些工作技能可以讓我更有力量來處理事情。) 非常謝謝您的指教 感激不盡。

回答 (3)

2011-04-10 11:52 pm
✔ 最佳答案
佩服版主任勞任怨的工作態度。請參考我的建議,換字部份就直接接著說明。

When I worked in XXX(公司), my assignments (老闆指派下的任務)were numerous and diverse.

During that period of time, my time management skills improved a lot. (時間管理的技巧 要說“進步” 不要說“才學到”) They helped me to prioritize and complete tasks (依事情輕重緩急 排出優先次序) efficiently and effectively.

I think these experiences are highly relevant to this job (也適用這份新工作), and can be assets to your company. (我會是貴公司的人力資產)

2011-04-11 05:42:37 補充:
這種證照是不是就是經檢定你很會用這些軟體啊?那版主在這方面您就是前輩,我還不會樞紐分析勒。>_< 建議可以這樣寫:
On the other hand, I am a certified user in application software such as Excel, PowerPoint, and web page design. (是Adobe Web Page嗎?最好也寫出軟體名稱)
I think my computer proficiency (電腦技能)can make me more productive at work. (更有力量就是 更有生產力)
2011-04-10 11:09 pm
When I was in XXX company, every day I have to do many things and is very complicated.In that period, I learned a good time to plan, perfect and efficient completion of everything.I think this experience for the job (refer to the job was going to interview) are important.
參考: 自己
2011-04-10 10:52 pm
When I was in XXX company time, every day I have to do many things and very complicated.
During that period, I learned a good time to plan, improve and effectively do everything.
I think this experience for the job (refer to the job interview to go) in terms is important.
當我在XXX公司的時候,每天我所要做的事情很多而且很繁雜。
在那段期間,我學習到了做好時間規劃、完善並有效率的完成每一件事。
我覺得這些經驗對於這份工作(指的是要去面試的那份工作)而言是重要的。
參考: self


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